Suggestions Welcome

[johnsmith2007]

I have three stories half completed at present in the 'Hamburg Couple' series and would welcome any ideas and prefernces.
At present I am doing non-fatel..but who knows.
1. The Germans in a 'revenge' match involving a Belgium couple and lots of 'tit milking' as this is set when both women have just given birth.
2. The Germans Vs a lesbian couple (African and Japanese women). Lots of leg torture due to an injury and a back story of betrayal etc)
3. The Germans as Refs in a nasty 'India Vs Pakistan' couples fight....might turn fatel or go into another story.

Or as I say any other ideas welcome

John

[cage]

Really love this series...I like all the ideas...

I'd like to add couple from the USA. An african-american woman in her her late thirties and her eighteen year old son. She's a former body builder now out of competition, still strong and with large breasts, hard thighs, big hands and a infamous mound and clit. He's a skilled young fighter with lots of stamina and a eleven inch cock. They got into fighting after a brief career in porno movies. Now they are infamous for breaking and humiliating a host of couples in the North American circuit. She likes to use a sandpaper covered hand held dildo. He is famous for shooting massive loads as many as six times in an hour.

But whatever you do write more...great stuff.

[MikeJV]

I've been thinking on it, and here's my thoughts:

1. The Germans in a 'revenge' match involving a Belgium couple and lots of 'tit milking' as this is set when both women have just given birth.

I like it, lots of potential for brutality.
V1: winner adopts loser's baby, losing couple can never have a rematch.
V2: losing couple retires after winning wife takes loser's clit, winning husband crushes loser's balls.

2. The Germans Vs a lesbian couple (African and Japanese women). Lots of leg torture due to an injury and a back story of betrayal etc)

I like this idea, and altho a mostly leg torture match does nothing for me, if you add in plenty of female crotch torture also, It'd add something for me and others who feel as I do about a leg match.

3. The Germans as Refs in a nasty 'India Vs Pakistan' couples fight....might turn fatel or go into another story.

This I really like, esspecially the chance it could go fatal. With the Germans as refs they could change/eliminate the rules on what can happen in the match. As a side note, if it goes fatal the boosted ratings could cause a special new match to be created for 2 couples that want to permanently retire their rivals.

MikeJV

[tr0tz]

Hi John,

your stories alway open a great new universe with new twists and developments. For the Japanase High School series: I loved the story line around silver and the roughness of those fights with very interesting stipulations (like the whip fight etc.). I hope you continue that series as well!

This new Hamburg couple series adds more sex and steam, but I'd wish it would take a more viscious side too. I'd still vote vor your first proposal, the revenge match involving lots of tit abuse. Perhaps one of the woman's sets of tits could get destroyed/maimed at the end?

In any case: each of your stories is a fascinating and intoxicating tale!

[feral,grrl]

Yessss.....
(to the above....)

f,g

[agraf74]

1. The Germans in a 'revenge' match involving a Belgium couple and lots of 'tit milking' as this is set when both women have just given birth.

That's OK, but rather than a fatal end, this scenario would call for both male and female milking! Of course, the disabling consequences for the males after cumming are worse than for the gals - and this will have the gals doing most of the fighting in the end.

2. The Germans Vs a lesbian couple (African and Japanese women). Lots of leg torture due to an injury and a back story of betrayal etc)

I don't know how the Germans will get out of that - but assuming the lesbian team is any good at making white women cumming, the German man will possibly end up solo against two...

3. The Germans as Refs in a nasty 'India Vs Pakistan' couples fight....might turn fatel or go into another story.

I'm all for peace, and hate that cold war with nuclear power between two halves of what should be a great nation (India and Pakistan) if the British had drawn those stupid frontiers almost a century ago. As things are, in fiction, I vote this for a realistic ?fight to the bitter end? scenario.

The Germans will pretend to make fair judgement, each time defending what team is losing - thus making the fight go on longer, and longer, and so with more injuries and bloodshed. At last, they will stop imposing rules, and stay back watching the remaining team finish their opponents.

4. After a good holiday period, the winning team could pay a visit to the USA underground circuit, and meet that upstarting team of mother-and-son... I expect whatever team wins, India or Pakistan, the woman will have waist long black hair and heavy breasts, and her man will be a sexual bull - so honours will be even at the start. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 11, 2007 03:39 PM: Message edited by: agraf74 ]</font>